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1 Mecha-Den - New Character on Tue Jul 19, 2016 12:03 am

Name:
 Mecha-Den

SL Login Name:
 vikutta

Age
 19
Languages Spoken (You may choose two to start with.)
English

Options: Common, Low Common, Feral, Zebrican, High Northern, Changeling
 Low Common?

Gender
 Male

Species/Race
 Android/robot/mech

Appearance - A necron looking pony with umbreon features and an enclave tail.

Character Tagged Skills (Select 3.  )
Big Guns, Energy Guns, Explosives, Flight, Magic: Elementalism, Magic: Thaumaturgy, Magic: Healing, Medicine, Melee, Science, Sneak, Small Guns, Speech, Unarmed.
 
  Energy Guns, Big Guns, Flight.

Character Perks - General
Select 3.
 Armed and Dangerous.
 Bringer of Justice
 Quick Recovery

Character Perks - Racial
Select 3.
Advanced Armor
Protocol
Automated Repair systems

Starting Gear (Maximum of 5 points worth.)
Armor, Ranged, Melee, and/or Special.
T5 Armor

Biography/Brief History
Mecha-Den is not aggressive when first approached. It is hard to actually anger him. But he will go full combat mode if a threat is made and/or if the threat takes action (I.E. Kidnapping, gun shot made)
Mecha-Den was created and designed by an unknown creator. Not much is known about the creator, as even Mecha-Den cant access his own file. But what he does know is that he was designed to protect and defend those of Royal ranks; The princesses. Of course, if he sees a pony in need, he will go out to defend. He came here to find a princess to protect or someone of Royal ranking.
Mecha-Den is not aggressive when first approached, but if any threats be made to him or to those defenseless around him, his artillery will initiate and He will make a warning before the situation may or may not escalate.


((Any critiques or recommendations is appreciated~))

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2 Re: Mecha-Den - New Character on Tue Jul 19, 2016 8:49 am

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Character appearance is a bit odd, Umbreon features? Necron? This is ponies of fallout. Nothing wrong with the backstory, rather mundane. A security robot that protects the royal line.

I suggest making the avatar fit more with the theme of the setting, seeing as it was designed to protect the royal line it looks a tad...Well, evil.

If you need help or suggestions for avatar making, then, we're more than willing to help--But, your character appearance does not fit in with the character back-story and contains elements that would be rather misplaced in the setting.

A suit of walking armor might be more suited, like a royal shining knight with a robot underneath--Instead of a nightmarish black monstrous creation.

Otherwise, nothing else stands out as needing adjustment. Except languages--English is not a Language in this system, and you may start with 2. "Common" would be the language most start with at character creation.

Provide an avatar that matches the backstory and I believe you'll be good to go.

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3 Mecha-Den Remodel on Tue Jul 26, 2016 11:33 pm

Name:
Mecha-Den

SL Login Name:
vikutta

Age
19
Languages Spoken (You may choose two to start with.)
Common
Zebrican

Gender
Male

Species/Race
Robot

Appearance - An android armored to the teeth. Blue light for the eyes, with emit through a slit in the helmet. Underneath is a mechanical looking pony.

Character Tagged Skills (Select 3.  )

-Energy Guns, Big Guns, Flight.

Character Perks - General
Select 3.
Armed and Dangerous.
Bringer of Justice
Quick Recovery

Character Perks - Racial
Select 3.
Advanced Armor
Protocol Schmotocol
Automated Repair systems

Starting Gear (Maximum of 5 points worth.)
Armor, Ranged, Melee, and/or Special.
T5 Armor

Biography/Brief History
Mecha-Den has been created to defend and protect those of royal rankings, the princesses.
This doesnt mean, however, that he is obligated to obey every command. If a command is given that he feels could compromise the safety of the princess, or any others, he will fail to obey the command; Unless he is overridden with the simple verbal key phrase "That's a Royal Order, Mecha-Den. You must obey." ((The point being given here is that the princess is using her absolute authority over mecha, giving him no reasoning to evade.))
He was deployed out of Canterlot, for extra guardian force, after being rebuilt completely. A great tragedy fell upon him after having being capture by foreign enemies, and being disabled beyond recognition. He was presumably dead until he was recovered by those close friends of his. Now, Since he is more machine, he is rather immune to emotion.
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((Any critiques or recommendations is again greatly appreciated!))

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4 Re: Mecha-Den - New Character on Thu Aug 04, 2016 4:10 pm

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Character Approved 8/4/16
Database Updated

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